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Sometimes
life isn't always fair
Sometimes
people aren't always there

When we think
that all is lost
We blame the world
but at what cost?

Is it the choices
that we make?
Is it the hearts?
we bruise and break
Is is our body?
we give so free
or is true love?
Wild and free?

We learn from life
through our mistakes

Our life is shaped
by the choice we make
©2007-2009 ~Od-69one
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Thinking about life and how things change

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:iconmonkeyfyst:
Wow, beautifully stated.

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"Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a Heaven for?" (Robert Browning)
:iconod-69one:
Thank you

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:iconvisualpoetress:
I love it :)

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:iconmsphattypoo:
So well written and SO DAMN TRUE !! :clap:

great work, my dude !

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:iconod-69one:
Thanks

(blushes)

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Whip me, bind me, bend me to your will...........
:iconl0st2bf0und:
love it its really pretty and meaning full it most be in my fav's

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:iconod-69one:
yes, thank you

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Whip me, bind me, bend me to your will...........
:icondarkclone:
I was recommended by a friend of mine who was browsing dA and happened by your page.

She was true to let me in on this awesome gallery of poetry. This is the first i've read and you've won me over. I tend to right alot of saddening poetry but i prefer to read happy ones. But enough about me.

Great work man, i'll watch you. :)

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:iconod-69one:
Thank very much for your kind words.

:blush:

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My Mistress, what is thy bidding.........

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